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Consider the following scenario:
Dr. Fran Practon gives you a rough draft of a letter that she wants you to put into final copy to send to the patient, Jason Chieu. It reads as follows:
“Dear Mr. Chieu,
I wanted to express my thank-you due to the fact that you referred your friend, Cherry Hotta, to our medical practice.
I recognize that this referral indicates that I provided good medical care for you and your family. I’m grateful for both your confidence and consideration.
My staff and I are committed to deliver the same quality care that you have come to expect from me.
Again thanks for your kindness in referring your friend to me.
Choose one of the following and rewrite the message to fit that prompt. Please also explain why you chose that option.
Rewrite it to give it a conversational tone.
Rewrite it to make it more concise and clear.
Rewrite it to give it a formal tone.
Send it as written.
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HEALTH SCIENCE
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